The plain-English problem email
Subject line options
- {{business_type}} in {{suburb}}
- quick question about {{pain_point}}
- {{first_name}}, more {{good_outcome}}?
When to use it
First email to an owner operator in a specific trade or business type.
Why it works
It names their business type and a loss they feel, in plain English. Offering calls outside working hours shows you understand their day.
Variants
Short
Formal
Aussie-direct
Common mistakes
- Using enterprise language such as 'stakeholders' or 'digital transformation'.
- Asking for a 45-minute demo.
Compliance note
Many small businesses publish a general address such as info@. Messages to a published address must still be relevant to the business, and the Spam Act's identification and opt-out rules apply.